39 · Reduced and marked

Punctuation is evidence

Punctuation helps a reader see how a sentence is grouped. A comma may mark a boundary, set off added information, or separate items in a list. The mark supports an analysis, but the words and their relationships determine what the groups are.

Two ways a relative clause can attach
Determiner · determinerNoun · headSubordinator · markerNoun phrase · gap · subjectVerb · intransitive verb · headVerb phrase · predicateClause · relative clause · postmodifierNominal · headNoun phrase · subjectAuxiliary · passive “be” · helping verbVerb · passive transitive verb · headVerb phrase · predicateSentenceTheenginethatstalledwasrepaired.

That stalled is an integrated relative clause inside the noun phrase headed by engine.

Determiner · determinerNoun · headSubordinator · markerNoun phrase · gap · subjectVerb · intransitive verb · headVerb phrase · predicateClause · relative clause · supplementNoun phrase · subjectVerb · intransitive verb · headVerb phrase · predicateSentenceThevisitors,whocomplained,waited.

The visitors, who complained, waited: the relative clause is supplementary.

start with the relationship

Let the mark direct your attention

What do the commas change?
Determiner · determinerNoun · headSubordinator · markerNoun phrase · gap · subjectVerb · intransitive verb · headVerb phrase · predicateClause · relative clause · postmodifierNominal · headNoun phrase · subjectVerb · intransitive verb · headVerb phrase · predicateSentenceThevisitorswhocomplainedwaited.

Without commas, who complained is integrated: it helps identify which visitors waited.

Determiner · determinerNoun · headSubordinator · markerNoun phrase · gap · subjectVerb · intransitive verb · headVerb phrase · predicateClause · relative clause · supplementNoun phrase · subjectVerb · intransitive verb · headVerb phrase · predicateSentenceThevisitors,whocomplained,waited.

With commas, the same clause is supplementary: added information about visitors already identified.

The words are identical; the commas support different relationships. Without them the clause sits inside the nominal and narrows the reference. With them it stands apart, commenting on a group the noun phrase has already picked out. The punctuation is evidence for that relationship, not the relationship itself.

Determiner · determinerNoun · headNoun phrase · subjectVerb · transitive verb · headDeterminer · determinerNoun · headNoun phrase · direct objectVerb phrase · predicateClause · coordinateConjunction · coordinatorDeterminer · determinerNoun · headNoun phrase · subjectVerb · intransitive verb · headVerb phrase · predicateClause · coordinateSentenceThemechanicrepairedtheengine,andthecarstarted.
The comma sits between two coordinate clauses but belongs to neither tree branch. The two clause frames and and establish the coordination.

a mark is not a clause type

The same caution applies to exclamation marks

Pronoun · headNoun phrase · subjectAuxiliary · modal · helping verbVerb · transitive verb · headAdverb · premodifierAdverb · headAdverb phrase · fronted phrasePronoun · headNoun phrase · subjectVerb · intransitive verb · headVerb phrase · predicateClause · exclamative clause · direct objectVerb phrase · predicateSentenceIcannotbelievehowfastsheran!
The diagram analyses how fast she ran as an exclamative clause inside the object slot. The final exclamation mark is outside that clause.

“Stop!” can take the same punctuation without containing an exclamative clause. A comma before and can also occur inside a noun-phrase list. First find the units and their jobs; then let punctuation support the reading you can already explain.

Let punctuation support the relationship you find.

A comma can point to a likely boundary, but the same mark appears in lists, appositives, coordinated clauses, and supplements. Identify the words and their relationships, then use the punctuation to check that reading.

Ten sentences from this lesson, one decision at a time.